Ravi

[Note: This is a short story with Ravi as the 'central' character]



Everyone
used to
love
She had left Ravi had lost his Job
killed
himself
Today



Bad bad Blogspot won't let me further format the story, not allowing even the addition of extra spaces in between the words to enhance readability. Thumbs down Google.... this story could be so much more...

5 comments:

  1. RaShMarch 28, 2009 at 11:12 PM

    Eh? I'm missing something I guess.

    PS: Use " " & "< p >" in your Edit HTML section while posting to add a space/line break. :)

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  2. RaShMarch 28, 2009 at 11:15 PM

    * For space: "& nbsp;"
    (Remove the spaces inside the quotes for this and < p >) :)

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  3. enchantingankiMarch 29, 2009 at 9:44 AM

    i like it...

    nice effort!!

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  4. Sidharth UllalMarch 30, 2009 at 10:52 AM

    @Rash: Ravi is the central character.. meaning that u got to really start reading the post from the centre. Going top, right or left in any order, but going downward leads you to the last part of the story...

    @enchantinganiki:Thanks!!!!

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  5. AnonymousMay 28, 2009 at 12:43 AM

    i love the concept behind this!! nicely done!

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